I think you have done a good job so far in regards to
getting out what you want to discuss. I also liked how you defined a generation
shift and discussed it in your second paragraph. I believe it was a good build
up for the meat of your paper that will lie in the middle paragraphs. One thing
that I do think you should rephrase is when you say that in Kafka’s work his
pillars pull characters back. I believe that stating that Kafka’s pillars
confine the characters is a more accurate statement.
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